Wednesday, June 4, 2008

Wonders



You wonder why Oakland teenagers drink, smoke, and get high?
I wonder why we grew up with liquor stores in every corner all our life.
You wonder why teenagers in Oakland drop out of school?
I wonder why we received the worst education, and the system wants to keep minorities as fools.
You wonder why teenagers in Oakland kill one another?
I wonder why the system tries to keep minorities from coming together.
You wonder why minorities in Oakland have so much rage?
I wonder why for centuries we have had to deal with so much pain.
You wonder why teenagers in Oakland join gangs?
I wonder why the system tries to keep us from taking any positive path.
You wonder why sometimes we give up and don’t try?
I wonder why Malcom X had to be shot and died.
So stop wondering…
And start realizing

6 comments:

Liil Shorty said...

heii female!! i didn't know you wrote poems.... it's really good and true!

Dora said...

Hey....... i like how NICE you wrote this poem you really now how to express in words how the area is.

Beatriz said...

Hey,

i really like how you expressed yourself. i like how you put all those questions into a poem i really like it

:)beatriz

Dream-er said...

Hey Chore!!!
This is a very nice poem, looks like you spent a lot of time in this ;] I really like how to place questions in the poem because you are asking to reader to think deeply about oakland

LaUrA said...

Dam thaz hella true
i be wondering those things
all the time and you
made me look at things in a better
way so thanx
-LaUrA=]

d2fly3 said...

wow i really like the poem. i like how you expressed how you felt!!!